Fate [[ch.1]]

Three years ago - 136 views
Fate [[ch.1]]
okay, this was supposed to be a mini-story, but then I thought...heyy this would be great if I made it into a full blown story.
 
So, yeah, I'll be doing two stories at the same time. I'll probably write ch.3 of "Text Her.." after this one.
 
Happy Thanksgiving to all :]
 
inspiration: the movie Gigi, if you haven't seen it & you like old films, it's absolutley lovely :]
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Characters:
 
Caroline Adams
age: 18-20
Goes to Berkley
Used to be extremly close to Derek.
 
Derek Messing
age: 18-20
Goes to Harvard.
 
Rachel Burns
age: 18-20
Carolines best friend
Goes to Berkley
 
there are other characters, but these are the ones that at the moment, have the most importance.
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Chapter 1:
 

"He's coming home tonight," my mother smiles as she takes a vase out of the closet.
 
"I know, this is the 20th time you've told me," I laugh as I take a magazine off the table.
 
"Caroline, you should be excited that he's coming to visit," my mother smiles as she pulls out a broom.
 
“Why? He visits all the time!” I reply as I flip through the fashion section.
 
"Yes, but you’re never there," she replies as she walks into the kitchen.
 
"I was with Rachel the last time. It's not every day that you get invited to go to Puerto Rico!" I reply as I follow after her.
 
"You could've called and said hello, he asked about you often," she smiles as she takes a container from the fridge.
 
"If he was so interested in seeing me, he could've called," I reply.
 
"Why don't you go get the mail, I should be getting some pictures from your grandmother today," my mother asks as she points to the door.
 
"Yeah," I groan as I grab my jacket from the kitchen table.
 
As I walked over to our obnoxiously colored mailbox, I tried to think of several ways of getting out of this dinner.
 
Derek and I used to be best friends, he promised that we'd be friends until the end, but of course things called Hormones got in the way and it turned south.
 
In about the 2nd semester of freshman year, Derek met Beth. Her name really should have been bit-, but I'm far too nice to call anyone by such a name. Well, at least not to their face.
 
Anyway, I tried to get to know Beth. Derek begged me to, saying that she was a lot nicer than she seemed, but of course she was wrong.
 
About 2-3 months into their relationship, Beth told Derek that I was trying to steal him away, and if he wanted her to stay, he had to stop seeing me.
 
Assuming that he'd choose me over her, I thought that I'd have nothing to worry about, but of course that wasn't the case.
 
He left me, the girl who had been friends with him since kindergarten for some girl that he only knew for about 8 weeks.
 
I tried to rid myself of him. Unfortunately, my mother and his are best friends.
 
I got accepted to Berkley, and he got a full-ride scholarship to Stanford.
 
I’m majoring in the visual arts, he’s majoring in Anthropology.
 
After two hours of trying to find the perfect outfit.
After one hour of trying to do my hair.
And after three hours of constantly telling my mother that her red a-line dress does not make her butt look big, we arrived at the restaurant.
 
"You two look gorgeous," Derek’s mother smiles as she motions for us to sit down.
 
“Thank you,” my mother and I reply as we take our seats.
 
“So, where is he?” my mother smiles as she pulls out her camera.
 
“He just called and said he’s about 10 minutes away,” she smiles.
 
As my mother and Derek’s mother chatted about the big sale at Kohl’s, I again tried to think of the possible ways of getting out of this.
 
This would be the first time in about 3 years since I’ve seen Derek. I had applied at the beginning of sophomore year to transfer to this amazing fine arts school. A month after Derek left me for Beth, I was accepted. I had the most amazing time there and had so many experiences that I would never have if I stayed at my pervious high school. Luckily, with my tight schedule and different school hours, I didn’t have to see Derek again. There were times when I missed our midnight escapades to Dairy Queen, but after what he did to me, I didn’t want to hear from him again.
 
“Oh, I just got a text message from him. He just parked his car,” Derek’s mother smiles as she puts her phone back in her purse.
 
“I’m so excited!” my mother smiles as she holds onto my arm.
 
“woo-hoo.” I reply as I roll my eyes.
 
I had already prepped myself for this. The awkward silence, my mother trying to strike a conversation between us and me constantly rejecting them, the frequent trips to the bathroom, and the dash to the car as soon as they pay for the bill.
 
“Hey, mom.” a man smiles as he walks towards our table.
 
“Hello, Ms. Adams,” the man smiles as he gives my mother a hug.
 
“Derek, you look so handsome,” my mother smiles as she offers the seat next to me.
 
“Caroline say hello,” my mother smiles as she gives me one of her looks.
 
“Caroline?!” Derek smiles as he gives me a huge smile.
 
“I’m so glad you came, you’re always so busy, I though I’d never see you again,” Derek smiles as he gives me a hug.
 
“Yeah,” I reply as I sit there in shock.
 
My whole battle plan was completely washed from my brain. Instead of wanting to be absolutely rude to him, I wanted him to hug me again. I couldn’t even believe that this could possibly happen, but….
 
Derek is gorgeous.
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Currently Watching:
Anthony Bourdain: No Reservations
 
I love the travel channel. :]
My aunt thinks its nerdy, well...blahhhhhh to her.
 
I really want to stud abroad during college or do something in the summer like People to People, but my mom hates were we live..so we're always leaving during breaks :/
 

STORY :D
If you're reading my stories then you probably know that "Love Was Made For Me And You" is going to end pretty soon...actually really soon. I've been thinking of ideas for my next story, and I've finally got one. It's a combination of a few and it reminds me of this extremly gorgeous foreign boy I know.
 
So...stay tuned :]
 
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"I'm Practicing What I'm Going To Do To Her Eyes."
I wonder if anyone else besides me knows where that's from.
 
At the moment I really hate pretty people :[
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Love Was Made For Me And You

4 years ago - 198 views
Love Was Made For Me And You
Chapter 8:
 
"You look beautiful!" my father smiles as he gives me a big hug
 
"You don't look too bad yourself." I laugh as I give him a hug in return
 
"You look completley different everytime I see you." my father smiles as he takes my stuff
 
"Jill!" my father yells from the hallway
 
"Yes si-
 
"ABBEY!!" Jill smiles as she gives me a hug
 
"Jill!" I smile as I run towards her.
 
Next my father Jill knows practically everything about me. She was basically my mother. She potty trained me, she helped me braid my hair, and she told me about the birds and the bees. I don't know what I'd do without her...or what I'd be like.
 
"Why didn't you tell me she was coming?" Jill says looking at my father
 
"It sort of slipped my mind.." my father laughs
 
"Well, I better tell everyone else!" Jill smiles as she grabs my bags
 
After Jill left we instantly started to talk about everything that had been happening in my life since my college graduation. We focused a lot on my relationships because my father really..really..really wants me to get married.
 
"Hunter, he's a nice boy." my father smiles as he offers me a cup of coffee
 
"He confuses me." I sigh as I take the cup
 
"I don't see how. He likes you." my father say
 
"But Stephen is so nice...and Hunter, he's just Hunter. I can't have them both." I reply
 
"Then who do you want the most?" my father asks
 
"I don't know." I say as I cross my legs
 
"Well, you should probably find out soon." my father smiles
 
"We've been talking about me a lot...how about you?" I smile as I get out of my chair
 
"Things have been good." my father laughs
 
"I think they've been more than good." I smile as I read his body language
 
"I've been seeing someone." my father says as he walks over to the living room
 
"NO WAY OMG WHO!?" I scream as I attack him in a hug
 
I felt like I was talking to one of my friends, but this was huge. I didn't think my father would ever get over my mother...but I was really hoping one day he would.
 
"Ms. Lanthrup." my father replies
 
"My old dance teacher?!" I smile
 
I was relieved to find out that it was someone I liked. Ms.Lanthrup was an amazingly nice lady and incredibly gorgeous. Barbie had nothing on her. She was like a mix of Julia Roberts and Megan Fox. Now that I think about it Ms.Lanthrup is pretty much the perfect match for my father.
 
"So you're not mad about this?" my father asks
 
"Why would I be mad!?!" I laugh
 
"Well, with your mother and everything..." my father says looking at the ground
 
"She was barley there...so is she coming to the New Years Eve party?" I smile
 
"yes." my father blushes
 
"It'll be nice to talk to her. I haven't seen her in forever, and mentioning the party...do you think Joslynn, Sarah, Grace, and Stacey could come?" I say hoping he'll say yes
 
"Sure." my father smiles as he walks up the stairs
 
"Thanks!" I yell from the bottom
 
I went to my room to find everything the way it was since I left for college. My pink walls, my pink fuzzy chair, my pink desk, my pink computer, and my pink picture frame with a picture of Hunter and I in it.
 
I took out my phone and clicked on the picture of Stephen and I.
 
"I hate this." I say looking at both of the pictures
 
Just as I was about to turn off my phone I got a call from Joslynn.
 
"I'm guessing your flight was good." Joslynn laughs as I pick up the phone
 
"Yeah, it was good & I just talked to my dad. You guys can come to the party on New Years." I smile
 
"I finally get to see what Sarah was talking about." Sarah laughs
 
"So why did you call?" I ask
 
"This is going to sound so highschool, but guess what happened while I was walking to the laundry room?" Joslynn smiles
 
"What?" I laugh
 
"Guess who asked me where you were?" Joslynn says
 
"Who?" I laugh
 
"Hunter." Joslynn laughs
 
"Really?" I say trying not to seem really excited.
 
"Yes! I was about to take some stuff out of the dryer, and then he walked in. As I walked out of the room he asked me where you were." Joslynn says
 
"Where did you tell him?" I ask
 
"Where do you think I told him? I told him you were at your fathers." I laugh
 
"What did he say after that?" I ask
 
"He just sighed." Joslynn says
 
"Oh." I sigh
 
"It was kind of like that." Joslynn laughs
 
"Well...I better call Sarah, Grace, and Stacey about the party. I could get you all plane tickets?" I say ready to press the end button
 
"Okay, thanks." Joslynn says
 
"I'll see you on wednesday." I smile as I turn off my phone
 
As I walked downstairs for dinner all I could think about is that....he thought about me.